Monday, March 5, 2007

Suspenseful Raptures

Suspenseful RapturesA girl gets kidnapped and raped. It's video taped the entire time and she's trying so hard not to fall prey to the erotic sensations. F/M , Lemon, Anal, BD, Beast, Fisting, Oral, MC, Solo, Sp, Tort, EVERYTHING! *This was written because nobody else would


Disclaimer: I own Shannon and no body can use her in their ways. BUT, if you have any ideas to mutilate her very soul, do tell! I'll be more than happy to put you in the next chapters.

Suspenseful RaptureMistressAlleycatMay 19, 2004Suspenseful RaptureCHAPTER ONE“Shh! She’s coming outside!” Dan growled as he ducked behind the nearest tree.“Is Vince ready with the camera?” Rick whispered over to Dan.“Not yet, he’s just putting in the battery.” Dan replied softly.“Well tell him to hurry up! She’s almost out the door.” Rick demanded.All three of the hidden guys stayed behind the bushes across the street. For months they’ve watched their neighbor’s girlfriend come over to visit and for months have planned this night. They’ve seen her in fancy dresses, laid back casual clothing, mature work clothes, and even skanky outfits that made their blood boil.But tonight was the night they were tired of boiling their blood.“Alright, it’s recording.” Vince whispered, holding the camera up just a little over the top of the bushes, making sure he was hidden in the shadows enough not to be seen. He slowly licked his lips.“Ah yeah, she’s in that little purple top again,” Vince grinned. “It kinda’ makes me feel harder than my ex-girlfriend made me feel when she was stripping for me.”“Dude,” Dan whispered over to him from the side. “Your ex also wasn’t getting spied on and about to get raped.”Vince chuckled a bit. “I know,” he replied, grinning.They watched as she sat in the car and started the engine. Her break lights went on and the car started to back out a few inches before the lights went back on and the door opened back up. She stepped out of the car, engine still running, and stepped back a few feet to look at it. Her back driver’s wheel was flattened. Looking up at the sky and grumbling, she headed to the door and removed her keys after turning off the car.“What’s she doing?” Dan asked confused as they watched her unlock her trunk and lift it open.The girl held the trunk lid up—the suspensions must be killed in it—and hoisted the jack out. After she placed the jack on the concrete, she went back to the trunk and lifted out a spare tire.“Fuck, she’s going to change the tire.” Rick grumbled.“All by herself? Vince asked, shocked she could do it on her own. “Fuck! We can’t let her do that; damn it!”“Dan, where you going?” Rick and Vince looked over as they saw Dan heading across the street toward the girl.“Is he going to do what I think he’s going to do?” Vince asked.“I think so.” Rick answered.“Hey there.” Dan spoke up. Startled, the girl snapped her head in his direction. “Need some help?”“Huh?” She asked, confused.“Changing the tire. I was packing my car for my trip tomorrow and I noticed you got a flat.” Dan looked over to the wheel and the parts she removed out of the trunk.“Oh, no I can do it on my own.” She smiled in return. “Thanks anyways.”“Holy shit! Did she just refuse his offer?” Vince asked.“You know…it isn’t that hard to change a tire.” Rick slowly looked over at Vince.“Fuck you.” Vince rolled his eyes.“Are you sure? It’ll take me only a few minutes and I can check to see what’s wrong with your tire before hand if you’d like. It may just be a nail or a little cut that I could fill up. Won’t take me long.”“I’m sure. I mean, if you’d like you can. But I know how to do it on my own.” She stepped back a little and watched as he inspected the tire up close.“When’s he going to get her? I don’t want to waste this fucking battery, damn it!” Vince groaned.“Just wait.” Rick replied.“Damn,” Dan stood back up.“What?” She asked, stepped forward.“Well…you’ve got some kind of slash. It looks like someone doesn’t want you going anywhere.” Dan looked over at her as she stepped up besides him.“I don’t understand; nobody’s even here. My boyfriend’s out of town and I’m taking care of his dog.” She folded her arms in thought. “Who’d do this?”“How long you been together?” Dan asked.“Several months over a year.” She answered then faced him questionably. “Why?”“You go to school with him?”“Oh, no. He’s a senior in high school; I’m third year in college.”“College? I thought you were in high school with him.” Dan smirked and folded his arms. “So…how old are you?”“Twenty-one. He’s eighteen.” She looked closer and noticed he was slowly nodding. “What?”“Nothing; just thought you were much younger.” Dan looked towards the bushes of his group and smirked. He hid a thumbs up in the shadows of his figure.“Well, I should really get this tire put on so I can head home.” She stated, beginning to reach down and lift up the jack.“Where do you live?” Dan kneeled down with her.“Ten or fifteen minutes from here; along the highway.” She faced him.“I can give you a lift, if you’d like. Have one of my friend deliver the car to you in the morning.”“Um…no. I need it for tomorrow.” She looked away.“Oh, well…just thought I’d ask. It’ll probably be a lot safer. But…since you don’t know me.” Dan shrugged. “What’s your name?”She faced him. “Shannon.”She remained motionless for a moment, expecting him to move away and change her tire as he said he would. Dan kept still, waiting for the right moment to tackle her. Neither one of them made a motion, until a sound from the bushes came forth and the leaves shook around.“What?” Shannon questioned, looking over Dan’s shoulder. “There’s something in the—” Shannon was cut off as Dan fell over and pinned her to the ground.He grabbed her wrists and pinned her arms to the ground and covered her lips with his own. She wiggled beneath his body to try and fight him off her, but got no where. She tried to move her legs enough to kick, but he managed to lay himself on top of her within the second he fell over her. She didn’t freak out entirely; she was always prepared to be suddenly tackled by the way she and her boyfriend had wrestled around. However, he wouldn’t bulge and he forced his tongue into her mouth to keep her from breaking away. He kept her busy by kissing her so she wouldn’t be able to think. No matter how hard she tried to do something, he was always right there countering it; he reminded her of her boyfriend.She tried to remain calm and let him kiss her that way when he’d break away she could carry on with her own plans, but when she felt the cushioned ground beneath her body, began to panic. Wilder now, she wiggled her body beneath his and squirmed against his grasp.“Grass, get me off the grass!” She snapped out.“Damn, chill!” Dan shouted at her.“Grass-grass-grass-get me off the grass!” She was breathing heavy and starting to panic.She tried to break free in a fury that Dan had to use all his man power to keep her wrists held tightly. However, that left her legs with the ability to break away and within a second of struggling, she managed to get her right knee in between his legs.“Get off me! Get off me, get off me, get off me!” She wiggled and squirmed some more until she got fed up with the fright of being on the grass and brought her knee up hard.“Ah, fuck!” Dan groaned out loud, instantly letting her loose and rolling off her. Shannon leaped to her feet and hopped off the grass until she was back at her car again and on the drive way.“What the fuck is your God damned problem!” Dan yelled, curled up in a ball and grabbing at his crotch.“I’m afraid of the grass, okay?” Shannon shouted back at him, trying to cool herself off.“God, you act like you’re going to die.” Dan got up on his knees and remained doubled over for a moment more.“I feel like I am, okay? I’m petrified of ants and being on the grass doesn’t help. It just terrifies me even more!” Shannon shut her eyes and lifted her head up to the sky, then looked back down at him again. “And why were you even trying to hold me down and kiss me? What’s with that?”“God…will you just shut her up?” Dan lifted his head as he saw Rick stepping up to them.“What?” Shannon looked over and noticed a second and third person coming into view; one had a camcorder in his hands and that only told her one thing: they were going to rape her.“You okay, Dan?” Vince asked.“God…she fucking creamed my nuts.” Dan groaned and slowly made his way to his feet.Shannon didn’t take a minute to think and started to high-tail her ass out of that group. Just as she left off her first step, Rick reached out and just barely missed her. Vince turned and watched as she ran off. Dan kicked off the grass and started to run after her. Shannon tried to run faster but she was in boots that had more of a heel than the support to do heavy stepping. In that case, Dan caught up with her in enough time to grab her right shoulder, reach around to grasp her left wrist, and spin her around to face him.Grinning, Dan looked at her and said, “Now you weren’t really thinking you could get away from us, did you?”In the streetlight of twelve o’clock at night, Shannon’s face turned to horror as she watched Rick run up to them and Dan grabbed both of her wrists together. She watched as Vince was slowly making his way toward the group and Rick reach around his back to pull out some kind of towel. He got in front of her and just rammed the damped paper towel on her face, covering her mouth and nose. Shannon struggled to break free again and tried to drop her weight to use her legs, but Dan had managed to get himself entangled with her body to where she couldn’t move one bit. Rick held the towel on her face, waiting for her to collapse. She tried to hold her breath, but the scent was strong and it managed to penetrate her senses through enough to grasp hold of her awareness.Within seconds, the darkness of the night engulfed her and her body lost all its strength as she gave in to the abyss of eternity.

1 comment:

Unknown said...

How can we read the rest of it? We love your story